Brainstorming:
The Effect of Less Sleep
A) Main Idea 1 - One
of the prime effects of sleepless is it can affect our physical state
B) Main Idea 2 - Lack of sleep can also
affect people’s mental state
C) Main Idea 3 - Other consequence of lack
of quality sleep is health
Do not use first person point of view such as 'our', 'mine', 'my', 'us' and that related to it..Plus check your singular and plural, 'EFFECT' or 'EFFECTS'?
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